Talk:Campaigners angry at new British police tracking system

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Review of revision 1230380 [Passed][edit]


For clarity, program is the correct spelling when referring to software. This is unaffected by UK-US quirks.

Additionally, this was published with several spelling errors, and a concerning amount of very passive voice phrasing.

I would recommend checking on comma usage too; you should avoid starting a sentence with "But" - if you do, it should almost-always be followed with a comma. --Brian McNeil / talk 22:38, 15 May 2011 (UTC)