Talk:Charlottesville, Virginia killer sentenced to life in prison

Review of revision 4486557 [Passed]

Revision 4486557 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:27, 1 July 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were some lengthy passages substantially from source. (Avoiding such should be habit.) Saying "many" merely because one source said 19 and the other said 35 is not good; "many" could mean a dozen people, or ten times that. Our own previous article said 19 or more. The comment by Trump that drew fire was the "fine people" one, not the "blame" one. (Also, the wording came out so it could be construed to mean the comment was the only reason the incident got national attention; oops.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4486557 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:27, 1 July 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were some lengthy passages substantially from source. (Avoiding such should be habit.) Saying "many" merely because one source said 19 and the other said 35 is not good; "many" could mean a dozen people, or ten times that. Our own previous article said 19 or more. The comment by Trump that drew fire was the "fine people" one, not the "blame" one. (Also, the wording came out so it could be construed to mean the comment was the only reason the incident got national attention; oops.) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.