Talk:Chilean earthquakes in the O'Higgins Region: photoessay

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The OR is that ... I took all the pictures :P --Diego Grez let's talk 16:18, 2 May 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1009796 [Passed][edit]

Edit request for minor copyedit by-proxy[edit]

The following changes are my suggestions for improvements to the style, but not substance, of the article:

  • First caption: I'd change "feel down" to "collapsed"
  • Second caption: "become dead" -> "been dead"
  • Seventh caption: "like the" -> "including the"
  • 8th caption: remove the first "that" and the first comma
  • 16th caption: "seen clearly" -> "clearly seen"
  • 17th caption should be rewritten entirely to "the location of the Colchagua museum prior to the 2010 Chile earthquake."
  • 18th should be rewritten to "Another house in Santa Cruz destroyed by the erthquake"
  • 32nd should be "A" house that served as "a" refuge...
HJ Mitchell Penny for your thoughts? 16:09, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
Done I think I got em all, but not sure. Cheers, C628 (talk) 18:36, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
Hmm. The description that you corrected was just that shows as text. Try adding the same to the caption of each image (when you move the cursor over it). --Diego Grez return fire 02:43, 13 May 2010 (UTC)

Edit request[edit]


Please add Category:Lolol --Diego Grez return fire 17:28, 22 May 2010 (UTC)

Please add Category:2010 Pichilemu earthquake and Category:O'Higgins Region too. --Diego Grez return fire 19:47, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
Done Benny the mascot (talk) 20:01, 26 May 2010 (UTC)


{{editprotected}} Wikilink La Cruz Hill > w:La Cruz Hill --Diego Grez return fire 17:51, 4 September 2010 (UTC)

See discussion at Talk:People from Pichilemu, Chile leave La Cruz Hill#Request. --Pi zero (talk) 13:57, 6 September 2010 (UTC)
Done --Pi zero (talk) 21:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)