Talk:Chilean earthquakes in the O'Higgins Region: photoessay

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OR[edit]

The OR is that ... I took all the pictures :P --Diego Grez let's talk 16:18, 2 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1009796 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1009796 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:32, 3 May 2010 (UTC).[reply]

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Revision 1009796 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:32, 3 May 2010 (UTC).[reply]

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Edit request for minor copyedit by-proxy[edit]

The following changes are my suggestions for improvements to the style, but not substance, of the article:

  • First caption: I'd change "feel down" to "collapsed"
  • Second caption: "become dead" -> "been dead"
  • Seventh caption: "like the" -> "including the"
  • 8th caption: remove the first "that" and the first comma
  • 16th caption: "seen clearly" -> "clearly seen"
  • 17th caption should be rewritten entirely to "the location of the Colchagua museum prior to the 2010 Chile earthquake."
  • 18th should be rewritten to "Another house in Santa Cruz destroyed by the erthquake"
  • 32nd should be "A" house that served as "a" refuge...
HJ Mitchell Penny for your thoughts? 16:09, 12 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done I think I got em all, but not sure. Cheers, C628 (talk) 18:36, 12 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm. The description that you corrected was just that shows as text. Try adding the same to the caption of each image (when you move the cursor over it). --Diego Grez return fire 02:43, 13 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request[edit]

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Please add Category:Lolol --Diego Grez return fire 17:28, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Please add Category:2010 Pichilemu earthquake and Category:O'Higgins Region too. --Diego Grez return fire 19:47, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done Benny the mascot (talk) 20:01, 26 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Request[edit]

{{editprotected}} Wikilink La Cruz Hill > w:La Cruz Hill --Diego Grez return fire 17:51, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

See discussion at Talk:People from Pichilemu, Chile leave La Cruz Hill#Request. --Pi zero (talk) 13:57, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Pi zero (talk) 21:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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