Talk:China plans to ban smoking in indoor public places

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Review of revision 1201145 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1201145 of this article has been reviewed by Cartman02au (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:11, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]

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  • Verifiability: Not ready: this statement is obviously incorrect - "China, with more than 300 smokers, is the largest cigarette market in the world."
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Revision 1201145 of this article has been reviewed by Cartman02au (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:11, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: this statement is obviously incorrect - "China, with more than 300 smokers, is the largest cigarette market in the world."
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  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

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It is true that there are more than 300 - but an understatement, to say the least. :) Was "million" meant? Tempodivalse [talk] 03:32, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1201439 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1201439 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:36, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: "The World Health Organisation says Chinese smoking-related deaths account for one fifth of deaths from smoking world-wide" is not verified in the sources.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

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Revision 1201439 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:36, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: "The World Health Organisation says Chinese smoking-related deaths account for one fifth of deaths from smoking world-wide" is not verified in the sources.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

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Review of revision 1201472 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1201472 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:32, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Good now. Thanks for the message on my talk page. If it was in the others I must have read over the 20%.

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Revision 1201472 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:32, 25 March 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Good now. Thanks for the message on my talk page. If it was in the others I must have read over the 20%.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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