Talk:Copiapó, Chile mining accident: in depth

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OR[edit]

Wrote the lead based on broadcast reports, info from Wikipedia, and general knowledge. The rest is taken from the sources provided. Diego Grez return fire 14:17, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Um... considering I wrote the original Wikipedia article with reliable sources... and that the story of the miners is being published elsewhere, I think... that this is weird. --Diego Grez return fire 16:07, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Ah... well. I will sort the article soon, to detail the new developments and the inminent rescue by today's night. Diego Grez return fire 16:31, 12 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Newer OR/Broadcast report[edit]

Got some of the Piñera quotes while he was on a press conference on TV. --Diego Grez return fire 03:43, 13 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

'The miners' section[edit]

Having so many subsections can be a bit annoying. Can you consider making a definition list with an entry for each miner? Kayau (talk · contribs) 13:20, 13 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Because that's the best formatting way I could think of. Bulleted lists are far more annoying than sections though. --200.28.90.213 (talk) 13:25, 13 October 2010 (UTC) (Diego Grez - School)[reply]
I meant definition lists, the ones that start with a semi-colon with a colon on the next line or in the middle of the same line. ;-) Kayau (talk · contribs) 11:55, 14 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Newer info[edit]

[1] and the following edits will contain info from w:TVN (Chile). They have been broadcasting the rescue from yesterday, and is a reliable source. Diego Grez return fire 21:06, 13 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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