Talk:Delhi earns UN carbon credits

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Review of revision 1292142[edit]

Revision 1292142 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:28, 26 September 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Some suggestions to improve technique:
    • Aim to write individual synthesis sentences that draw on multiple source passages, either multiple passages far form each other in a source, or better yet, multiple passages from different sources.
    • Don't follow the sentence structure of a source; rearrange the ordering of ideas within a source passage. Leaving out a few of the less important ideas from a source passage helps.
    • Watch out for 'paraphrase' that actually changes the meaning from what the sources said.
  • In my role as reviewer, my edits have been to remove material (mainly distance from source, unverified, brevity for clarity), reorder passages for distance from sources, and surgically clarify/correct a few presented facts.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1292142 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:28, 26 September 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Some suggestions to improve technique:
    • Aim to write individual synthesis sentences that draw on multiple source passages, either multiple passages far form each other in a source, or better yet, multiple passages from different sources.
    • Don't follow the sentence structure of a source; rearrange the ordering of ideas within a source passage. Leaving out a few of the less important ideas from a source passage helps.
    • Watch out for 'paraphrase' that actually changes the meaning from what the sources said.
  • In my role as reviewer, my edits have been to remove material (mainly distance from source, unverified, brevity for clarity), reorder passages for distance from sources, and surgically clarify/correct a few presented facts.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Review of revision 1292150 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1292150 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:29, 26 September 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm a klutz. See my detailed review comments above.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1292150 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:29, 26 September 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm a klutz. See my detailed review comments above.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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