Talk:Egypt opens Rafah border crossing sporadically during Gaza crisis

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Current headline,

Egypt is opening Rafah border crossing sporadically for the transfer of injured and aid but is reluctant to advance a cease fire between Israel and the Gaza Strip

is way too long; somebody (reporter, reviewer, anyone) is going to have to work out a way to make it a lot shorter; should be less than half current length. --Pi zero (talk) 21:55, 12 July 2014 (UTC)

First pass, did simple stuff, no meaning change. Now
Egypt opening Rafah border crossing sporadically for Gaza injured and aid; reluctant to advance a cease fire
Still too long, but it's a start. --Pi zero (talk) 23:42, 12 July 2014 (UTC)

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