Talk:Egyptian President Morsi makes state visit to China

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Review of revision 1603449 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1603449 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:59, 30 August 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The article is a bit short....we require 3 paragraphs, consisting of at least 3 sentences each.
  • This sentence:"[...]and to access Chinese capital and expertise to boost the Egyptian economy." I love that sentence, and it totally belongs in a book....but not in a news article. Can you make it.....er, a bit drier?
  • The article is almost there....just do a quick re-read, and remember (as you presumably will add a bit more): this visit started, 37 hours ago (approximately, per UTC).....remember that in terms of tense. --Bddpaux (talk) 00:59, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 1603449 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:59, 30 August 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The article is a bit short....we require 3 paragraphs, consisting of at least 3 sentences each.
  • This sentence:"[...]and to access Chinese capital and expertise to boost the Egyptian economy." I love that sentence, and it totally belongs in a book....but not in a news article. Can you make it.....er, a bit drier?
  • The article is almost there....just do a quick re-read, and remember (as you presumably will add a bit more): this visit started, 37 hours ago (approximately, per UTC).....remember that in terms of tense. --Bddpaux (talk) 00:59, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1604105 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1604105 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:00, 30 August 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1604105 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:00, 30 August 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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