Talk:Egyptian court sends three Al-Jazeera journalists to jail

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Review of revision 2705569 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 2705569 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:02, 23 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Most of the quotes are not in the sources (anymore), afaics; I only found the Julie Bishop one.
  • The Reuters article (now) says Mohamed Fahmy is the Cairo bureau chief, not Baher Mohamed.
  • One source mentions three others tried in absentia, the other source says eleven; I don't see anyone saying nine.

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Revision 2705569 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:02, 23 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Most of the quotes are not in the sources (anymore), afaics; I only found the Julie Bishop one.
  • The Reuters article (now) says Mohamed Fahmy is the Cairo bureau chief, not Baher Mohamed.
  • One source mentions three others tried in absentia, the other source says eleven; I don't see anyone saying nine.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 2705778 [Passed][edit]

Revision 2705778 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:58, 23 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Sorry the Amnesty International quote went south; I'm guessing Reuters changed their source. Could be replaced with another quote, or another source provided; the article is better with that without.

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Revision 2705778 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:58, 23 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Sorry the Amnesty International quote went south; I'm guessing Reuters changed their source. Could be replaced with another quote, or another source provided; the article is better with that without.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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