Talk:Eighth Filipino journalist killed this year

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I created this notable news on the 8th journalist killed. Our country the Philippines had been criticized as one of the most unsafe places to live. In Wikipedia English I created the major article on Philippine e-j killings - Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines--Florentino Floro (talk) 08:12, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Points requiring attention[edit]

  • Over-use of parenthesis
  • Lists make readability slightly problematic
  • Only Wikinews reports go in the Related news section
  • Sources are to be sorted newest to oldest

It may be that this would benefit from not listing all the previously killed journalists to improve readability. --Brian McNeil / talk 08:36, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Review #1[edit]

I had developed and updated this article for review[edit]

Accordingly, I had developed and updated this article hoping it will pass the Wiki standards. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 07:17, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Review 2[edit]