Talk:Eighth Filipino journalist killed this year

I created this notable news on the 8th journalist killed. Our country the Philippines had been criticized as one of the most unsafe places to live. In Wikipedia English I created the major article on Philippine e-j killings - Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines--Florentino Floro (talk) 08:12, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Points requiring attention

• Over-use of parenthesis
• Lists make readability slightly problematic
• Only Wikinews reports go in the Related news section
• Sources are to be sorted newest to oldest

It may be that this would benefit from not listing all the previously killed journalists to improve readability. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 08:36, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Review #1

Revision 735665 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:33, 4 December 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs major work, follow the points above listed by Brian McNeil. Comments by reviewer: Could be a good article, once those style issues are fixed :), TUFKAAP (talk) 15:33, 4 December 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 735665 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:33, 4 December 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs major work, follow the points above listed by Brian McNeil. Comments by reviewer: Could be a good article, once those style issues are fixed :), TUFKAAP (talk) 15:33, 4 December 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

I had developed and updated this article for review

Accordingly, I had developed and updated this article hoping it will pass the Wiki standards. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 07:17, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Review 2

Revision 737157 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:30, 7 December 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please take care not to violate copyright by using the same words or phrasing as your sources. Gopher65talk 02:30, 7 December 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 737157 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:30, 7 December 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please take care not to violate copyright by using the same words or phrasing as your sources. Gopher65talk 02:30, 7 December 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.