Talk:Eyewitnesses challenge Egyptian state media impartiality in fatal protests

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Review of revision 1300270 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1300270 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:38, 12 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: A couple of points that could not be verified; one: "Nile News... is also condemned by eye-witnesses for failing to run footage repeatedly aired on local and foreign channels." Two: Mahmoud Yousset didn't tweet that - Taghreed al-Dossouky did.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1300270 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:38, 12 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: A couple of points that could not be verified; one: "Nile News... is also condemned by eye-witnesses for failing to run footage repeatedly aired on local and foreign channels." Two: Mahmoud Yousset didn't tweet that - Taghreed al-Dossouky did.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Review of revision 1300777 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1300777 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:30, 13 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not ready: See below.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • You've replaced the (per earlier review) unverified claim of eyewitnesses with an unattributed assertion of fact, expanding the problem from verification to neutrality.
  • The second unverified fact from the earlier review has not been addressed.

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Revision 1300777 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:30, 13 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not ready: See below.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • You've replaced the (per earlier review) unverified claim of eyewitnesses with an unattributed assertion of fact, expanding the problem from verification to neutrality.
  • The second unverified fact from the earlier review has not been addressed.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1301096 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1301096 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:38, 13 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1301096 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:38, 13 October 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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