This is below minimal length, which is at least three paragraphs with total text equivalent to about three medium-sized paragraphs (medium-sized for a news article, that is, which would be small for an encyclopedia article; the text doesn't have to be evenly distributed between paragraphs). Here the lede paragraph is kind of long. I'd say a few more sentences are wanted.
A complication is that somebody else has now submitted an article about, it looks like, the same event; they've never contributed to Wikinews before, apparently, and I haven't checked to see (for example) whether they knew to avoid copyvio.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
This is below minimal length, which is at least three paragraphs with total text equivalent to about three medium-sized paragraphs (medium-sized for a news article, that is, which would be small for an encyclopedia article; the text doesn't have to be evenly distributed between paragraphs). Here the lede paragraph is kind of long. I'd say a few more sentences are wanted.
A complication is that somebody else has now submitted an article about, it looks like, the same event; they've never contributed to Wikinews before, apparently, and I haven't checked to see (for example) whether they knew to avoid copyvio.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
There were details I had a lot of trouble verifying. Everything has to be verified from the sources. You should have cited the earlier article as a source — which you do by listing it in a Related news section; I did that for you, but it's more than a reviewer can be asked to do and it's just lucky that I knew to do it since I'd reviewed the other. That covered some things, and the stuff about Juventus I managed to turn up after some digging.
About the first two out of three hours on this review, with admittedly various real-world distractions, were spent on format-related stuff; review gets a lot more efficient as Wikinews writers get more fluent in these details.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
There were details I had a lot of trouble verifying. Everything has to be verified from the sources. You should have cited the earlier article as a source — which you do by listing it in a Related news section; I did that for you, but it's more than a reviewer can be asked to do and it's just lucky that I knew to do it since I'd reviewed the other. That covered some things, and the stuff about Juventus I managed to turn up after some digging.
About the first two out of three hours on this review, with admittedly various real-world distractions, were spent on format-related stuff; review gets a lot more efficient as Wikinews writers get more fluent in these details.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.