Talk:Fighting in Gaza sparks riots in West Bank

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Review of revision 2768617 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 2768617 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 26 July 2014 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
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Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm not finding anything at all in the sources about Kerry, and nothing about Abbas related to ceasefire talks either; I've not explored the last paragraph further than that; could a source have been omitted?
  • The BBC source is pretty weak on which events took place on Thursday, but the Ramallah march seems to have been on Thursday; I don't find either source here mentioning Wednesday at all. It appears to me a third source would be highly desirable to provide a clearly overall picture of what was going on.
  • It sounds as if things were expected to happen on Friday as well, and while revising the article it would be desirable to provide updates on later developments.

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Revision 2768617 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 26 July 2014 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm not finding anything at all in the sources about Kerry, and nothing about Abbas related to ceasefire talks either; I've not explored the last paragraph further than that; could a source have been omitted?
  • The BBC source is pretty weak on which events took place on Thursday, but the Ramallah march seems to have been on Thursday; I don't find either source here mentioning Wednesday at all. It appears to me a third source would be highly desirable to provide a clearly overall picture of what was going on.
  • It sounds as if things were expected to happen on Friday as well, and while revising the article it would be desirable to provide updates on later developments.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 2771286 [Passed][edit]

Revision 2771286 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:41, 28 July 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2771286 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:41, 28 July 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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