There were some passages too close (i.e., similar) to source. Do not imitate source passages, or copy and "scuff then up"; though the information is from the sources, the presentation should be entirely your own. Your choice of facts (of course), organization, paragraph structure, sentence structure, phrase structure. Avoid peculiar word choices and turns of phrase. There should then be little over-closeness, but as a sanity check, there generally oughtn't be more than three consecutive words identical to a source, with obvious exceptions like titles.
The size/scope of the construction project is an aspect of the story that could be of interest to our international readers (I had to do a double-take myself, over the use of the definite article in "the Barangaroo construction site").
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There were some passages too close (i.e., similar) to source. Do not imitate source passages, or copy and "scuff then up"; though the information is from the sources, the presentation should be entirely your own. Your choice of facts (of course), organization, paragraph structure, sentence structure, phrase structure. Avoid peculiar word choices and turns of phrase. There should then be little over-closeness, but as a sanity check, there generally oughtn't be more than three consecutive words identical to a source, with obvious exceptions like titles.
The size/scope of the construction project is an aspect of the story that could be of interest to our international readers (I had to do a double-take myself, over the use of the definite article in "the Barangaroo construction site").
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
