Talk:Former Indian president APJ Abdul Kalam dies at age 83

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Review of revision 3701479 [Passed][edit]

Revision 3701479 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:27, 28 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • More background about his life would have been good. Properly, an obituary contains information about the deceased's life as well as their death. An attempt to mention his efforts with students didn't work out because, unfortunately, I failed to find verification in the sources for the stated assertion.
  • There were some passages overly close to source, which I tried to distance somewhat but preferably seek a complete different way to convey the information.

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Revision 3701479 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:27, 28 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • More background about his life would have been good. Properly, an obituary contains information about the deceased's life as well as their death. An attempt to mention his efforts with students didn't work out because, unfortunately, I failed to find verification in the sources for the stated assertion.
  • There were some passages overly close to source, which I tried to distance somewhat but preferably seek a complete different way to convey the information.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Time[edit]

6:30 p.m. IST is 1300 UTC. There seems an error in the article.
14.139.242.195 (talk) 15:09, 14 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Not only does there seem to be, there is... --Pi zero (talk) 15:40, 14 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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