Talk:Former U.S. FBI Director James Comey testifies about President Trump

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Review of revision 4321697 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4321697 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:33, 10 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I could wish for more detail (though, with review so sluggish lately, I can quite understand trying to keep things short).

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Revision 4321697 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:33, 10 June 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I could wish for more detail (though, with review so sluggish lately, I can quite understand trying to keep things short).
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Wording too definitive?[edit]

"about the Russian involvement in the last year's election that brought Trump to power."

Are we meaning "about the Russian involvement in the last year's election, an election that brought Trump to power."? While I personally agree that they probably had enough influence to tip the balance, the way it's worded has been questioned on Wikinews' Facebook page. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:16, 11 June 2017 (UTC) Zanimum (talk) 15:16, 11 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yet nobody (present company included) has edited the article to clarify? Sigh. If I edit it, I can't sight the edit; but perhaps Acagastya will review it. Well, I agree it could be read that way, though it hadn't even occurred to me (nor, I imagine, to the reporter) earlier. Editing... --Pi zero (talk) 15:32, 11 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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