Talk:French tourists killed in California bus rollover accident

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Revision 811861 of this article has been reviewed by Sean Heron (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:48, 29 April 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The article would have been fine as "breaking" news. But I'm afraid a lot of the statements in the article are no longer correct/ have been clarified and updates - ie it was French tourists, etc. I think the article will need an overhaul to be published :/, Sean Heron (talk) 13:48, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 811861 of this article has been reviewed by Sean Heron (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:48, 29 April 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The article would have been fine as "breaking" news. But I'm afraid a lot of the statements in the article are no longer correct/ have been clarified and updates - ie it was French tourists, etc. I think the article will need an overhaul to be published :/, Sean Heron (talk) 13:48, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review - wahay, pass ![edit]

Revision 812252 of this article has been reviewed by Sean Heron (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:35, 29 April 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The update was just what I was looking for and then some! Sean Heron (talk) 23:35, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 812252 of this article has been reviewed by Sean Heron (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:35, 29 April 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The update was just what I was looking for and then some! Sean Heron (talk) 23:35, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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