Talk:Funeral for Pope Shenouda III of Alexandria held in Cairo

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Review of revision 1439742 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1439742 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:58, 18 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not ready: There may be further such problems lurking, but the first two sentences of the second paragraph are near-identical to the BBC.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: It says "he stuck by the doctrine including along the line of divorce." We could do with an explanation of what the doctrine's position on divorce actually is.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1439742 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:58, 18 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not ready: There may be further such problems lurking, but the first two sentences of the second paragraph are near-identical to the BBC.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: It says "he stuck by the doctrine including along the line of divorce." We could do with an explanation of what the doctrine's position on divorce actually is.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1441957 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1441957 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:57, 20 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • The two sources for the funeral have a great many verbatim-identical sentences; however, they seem also to have material unique to them, and the earlier source is a separate report.

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Revision 1441957 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:57, 20 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • The two sources for the funeral have a great many verbatim-identical sentences; however, they seem also to have material unique to them, and the earlier source is a separate report.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1441961 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1441961 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:59, 20 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • See comment on earlier, accidentally failing, review. (Argh.)

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1441961 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:59, 20 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • See comment on earlier, accidentally failing, review. (Argh.)
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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