Talk:Governor of US state of Alabama signs state anti-abortion measure

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Review of revision 4480849 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4480849 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:35, 17 May 2019 (UTC).[reply]

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  • Currently just a bit below minimal length; perhaps a couple more sentences, at least, would bring it up over the threshold.

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Revision 4480849 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:35, 17 May 2019 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready:

Comments by reviewer:

  • Currently just a bit below minimal length; perhaps a couple more sentences, at least, would bring it up over the threshold.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

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Can you make it sound like something which the global audience would care about? What is "Alabama" and why would anyone care?
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I'd struggled with that. Addressed it in the lede, hadn't yet worked quite what to do about it in the headline. Reminder appreciated. --Pi zero (talk) 14:26, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4480973 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4480973 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:16, 18 May 2019 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Given the close deadline, I simply cut unverifiable material; fortunately, the amount of additional material added since the first review was sufficient to stay clear of the minimal threshold despite the cuts.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4480973 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:16, 18 May 2019 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Given the close deadline, I simply cut unverifiable material; fortunately, the amount of additional material added since the first review was sufficient to stay clear of the minimal threshold despite the cuts.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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