Talk:Guantanamo inmate challenges force-feeding practices by suing U.S. president

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Review of revision 2465663 [Not ready][edit]

Comment[edit]

Reading through the article (which I started to do last night, but was alas distracted from by the problem with the third paragraph), I find I don't understand the last paragraph. It seems a potentially important point, as to why it make sense to file suit solely against Obama; but I don't see what his vowing to close Gitmo has to do with it, especially when following a paragraph about a spokesperson saying DoD is responsible for the humane treatment of the prisoners. I'm starting the source check and hoping there may turn out to be a very simple fix, something I as reviewer can do; but it seems unfortunate I didn't notice this difficulty to include in the first review. --Pi zero (talk) 17:45, 13 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 2467945 [Passed][edit]