Talk:Guyanese shadow finance minister Winston Murray dies aged 69

Review of revision 1133495 [Failed]

Revision 1133495 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:18, 24 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Several passages are too close to one or the other source. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Two sons (as SN says), or three children (as CWN says)? Also, the driver's role comes out sounding much more independent than the source paints it. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Doesn't say when he died (not even what day). Comments by reviewer: The statement that he'd been on life support since the 11th, and the one that he was put on life support "later", don't really contradict each other (presumably "later" was later the same day), but they come across sounding oddly conflicting — an appearance that has been preserved from the Stabroek News article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1133495 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:18, 24 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Several passages are too close to one or the other source. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Two sons (as SN says), or three children (as CWN says)? Also, the driver's role comes out sounding much more independent than the source paints it. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Doesn't say when he died (not even what day). Comments by reviewer: The statement that he'd been on life support since the 11th, and the one that he was put on life support "later", don't really contradict each other (presumably "later" was later the same day), but they come across sounding oddly conflicting — an appearance that has been preserved from the Stabroek News article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1133765 [Passed]

Revision 1133765 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:49, 24 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1133765 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:49, 24 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.