Talk:High winds in Texas cause property damage and utilities loss for many

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  • I live in East Texas (quite a few miles East of Dallas) and these winds started about 10:00pm local time on Wednesday night (for us, at least). I woke up this morning to find one-half of a rather large willow tree lying atop my house! One of those situations when the reporter becomes a part of the story! --Bddpaux (talk) 17:42, 20 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thursday morning, 7:08am local time, watching a news bit about the storm on t.v. provided by the Dallas ABC-News affiliate, which showed shots of fallen lamp posts and overturned playground equipment.--Bddpaux (talk) 20:12, 21 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also, Thursday morning........odd to see so many cars around town (Tyler) just layered with dirt! Mine is in the photo. --Bddpaux (talk) 18:30, 22 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1748338 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1748338 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:32, 23 December 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Would be good to give more specific credit for the playground thing (more specific than 'one media source'). It does acknowledge the source was specific, and I didn't feel confident identifying the source specifically from the reporter's notes.
  • The other editor has a point that 'various locales' is rather vague; some indication at least of how various would be good.

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Revision 1748338 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:32, 23 December 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Would be good to give more specific credit for the playground thing (more specific than 'one media source'). It does acknowledge the source was specific, and I didn't feel confident identifying the source specifically from the reporter's notes.
  • The other editor has a point that 'various locales' is rather vague; some indication at least of how various would be good.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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