Talk:Ian Holloway sacked as manager of Millwall F.C.

Review of revision 3309153 [Passed]

Revision 3309153 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:23, 14 March 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The when of the focal event was omitted from the lede; careful of that, it's a sadly neglected basic question in much modern journalism and a key element in assessing freshness. In this case, the focal event is four days ago, so freshness really wants some 'new information come to light'; from the evidence available here the quote from Lawrence seems three days old, and this appears not a rapidly moving story, so I've chosen to allow the point. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3309153 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:23, 14 March 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The when of the focal event was omitted from the lede; careful of that, it's a sadly neglected basic question in much modern journalism and a key element in assessing freshness. In this case, the focal event is four days ago, so freshness really wants some 'new information come to light'; from the evidence available here the quote from Lawrence seems three days old, and this appears not a rapidly moving story, so I've chosen to allow the point. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.