Talk:Indian Prime Minister accuses Pakistan of waging proxy war

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Pre-review comments[edit]

  • We require at least three paragraphs.
  • The first paragraph —the lede— should briefly summarize the focus by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about it. A good lede is likely to be only one medium-sized paragraph [sentence], perhaps two; it doesn't contain details or background, and if it has needed context, that probably takes a half dozen words or less.
It's likely this can be accomplished here by inserting a paragraph break after the first sentence. If so, I (for one reviewer) would consider it something a reviewer can do during review without compromising their independence for review.

--Pi zero (talk) 12:19, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

Apologies....On it...Correction --Abhinav619 (talk) 01:43, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

Review of revision 2808301 [Passed][edit]