Talk:Iranian Navy conducts drills in Strait of Hormuz

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Review of revision 1753385 [Not ready][edit]

It does seem this could use some words up-front to explain why it's significant (ergo, newsworthy). The language does need some general cleanup here and there.
Is this below length? As I say, it could use better explanation up-front of significance, and that would probably put it outside of any questionable zone on length. I might have put it on the "safe" side on length, myself. --Pi zero (talk) 21:06, 28 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Title's grammar needs to be fixed:

Iranian Navy conducts drills in the Strait of Hormuz

Review of revision 1756419 [Passed][edit]