Talk:James Bond star Roger Moore, 89, dies
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Revision 4317009 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:42, 25 May 2017 (UTC).
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Any passage that I should paraphrase?
[edit]I was told not to "copy-and-scuff". Would that be the whole article? --George Ho (talk) 12:52, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
I was able to trim down details and rephrase the whole article. Therefore, copyright issues are reduced. --George Ho (talk) 13:49, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
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Revision 4317121 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:09, 25 May 2017 (UTC).
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Revision 4317121 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:09, 25 May 2017 (UTC).
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The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |