Talk:Japan's Air Self-Defense chief fired over essay on wartime history

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I am having difficulties reviewing this article. The NHK sources are either bad links or already taken off-line. I cannot read the Japanese-language sources. That said, the story does seem to be factually accurate in the major points, even if I couldn't confirm every detail. Can we publish? --SVTCobra 23:17, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

I replaced four sources, and rewrote some expressions, deleting two factors which seemed not most important. Now no parts are depending on the four troublesome sources. It's ready for review, isn't it? Thanks for collaboration. --Dumpty-Humpty (talk) 09:44, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

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