Talk:Japan's Air Self-Defense chief fired over essay on wartime history

Review

I am having difficulties reviewing this article. The NHK sources are either bad links or already taken off-line. I cannot read the Japanese-language sources. That said, the story does seem to be factually accurate in the major points, even if I couldn't confirm every detail. Can we publish? --SVTCobra 23:17, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

I replaced four sources, and rewrote some expressions, deleting two factors which seemed not most important. Now no parts are depending on the four troublesome sources. It's ready for review, isn't it? Thanks for collaboration. --Dumpty-Humpty (talk) 09:44, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Review version 720935

Revision 720935 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:42, 5 November 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Nice article --SVTCobra 15:42, 5 November 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 720935 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:42, 5 November 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Nice article --SVTCobra 15:42, 5 November 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.