Talk:Jeff Jones resigns as president of Uber

Review of revision 4297879 [Passed]

Revision 4297879 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:29, 22 March 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were some passages too close to source. Develop a synthesis-writing technique that does not involve starting with source passages and modifying them; there is some (compact) advice on this at WN:PILLARS#own, and discussion at WN:Plagiarism. Fowler also had things to say about Uber's corporate culture, which were mentioned in sources iirc, and which could have been mentioned here as relevant to the resignation. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4297879 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:29, 22 March 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There were some passages too close to source. Develop a synthesis-writing technique that does not involve starting with source passages and modifying them; there is some (compact) advice on this at WN:PILLARS#own, and discussion at WN:Plagiarism. Fowler also had things to say about Uber's corporate culture, which were mentioned in sources iirc, and which could have been mentioned here as relevant to the resignation. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.