Talk:Journalist accuses Algerian footballer of assault after World Cup exit

Quote

Would this journalist really refer to herself as 'she' in the quote? Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 19:32, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

Oddly enough I can't find that quote in any of the sources. BBC has that info, but not as a direct quote from her. Probably should be rephrased. Tempodivalse [talk] 19:38, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

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Revision 1050171 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:52, 25 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The slap is not verifiable, but it is verifiable that allegations were made. The copyright concerns seem to be sorted out, so pass. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1050171 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:52, 25 June 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The slap is not verifiable, but it is verifiable that allegations were made. The copyright concerns seem to be sorted out, so pass. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Journalistic style

The lede of this article is particularly weak, and does not meet the Wikinews styleguide. If possible the lede should cover briefly all the major points of the article in the active voice, and the rest of the article should expand and provide support for all statements in the leading paragraph. - Amgine | ^t 15:06, 25 June 2010 (UTC)