Talk:Journalist accuses Algerian footballer of assault after World Cup exit

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Quote[edit]

Would this journalist really refer to herself as 'she' in the quote? Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 19:32, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

Oddly enough I can't find that quote in any of the sources. BBC has that info, but not as a direct quote from her. Probably should be rephrased. Tempodivalse [talk] 19:38, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

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Journalistic style[edit]

The lede of this article is particularly weak, and does not meet the Wikinews styleguide. If possible the lede should cover briefly all the major points of the article in the active voice, and the rest of the article should expand and provide support for all statements in the leading paragraph. - Amgine | t 15:06, 25 June 2010 (UTC)