I found one passage much too close to source. (Figured fixing was tolerably within reviewer's purview since it was just the one.)
Demands for Yazidis to convert were mentioned in one or more cases; demands for residents to leave were mentioned in one case. The synthesis passage about these things, though, seemed to suggest Christians and Yazidis were consistently given the option of doing one or the other before stuff was done to them, and I didn't find support for that. I didn't see how, within reviewer's purview, to adjust it to say something I could verify. So I cut most of it out, merely rescuing the identification of the two minorities by moving it up into the remaining sentence of the paragraph. Afaics the persecuted minorities mentioned were identified as religious minorities.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
I found one passage much too close to source. (Figured fixing was tolerably within reviewer's purview since it was just the one.)
Demands for Yazidis to convert were mentioned in one or more cases; demands for residents to leave were mentioned in one case. The synthesis passage about these things, though, seemed to suggest Christians and Yazidis were consistently given the option of doing one or the other before stuff was done to them, and I didn't find support for that. I didn't see how, within reviewer's purview, to adjust it to say something I could verify. So I cut most of it out, merely rescuing the identification of the two minorities by moving it up into the remaining sentence of the paragraph. Afaics the persecuted minorities mentioned were identified as religious minorities.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
