Talk:Leona Lewis assaulted at book signing in London, England

Review of revision 896880 [Failed]

Revision 896880 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:48, 14 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: First paragraph repeats headline, see [[1]] Comments by reviewer: This is not the first time I have highlighted this issue. This is the first time I have failed an article for it. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 896880 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:48, 14 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: First paragraph repeats headline, see [[2]] Comments by reviewer: This is not the first time I have highlighted this issue. This is the first time I have failed an article for it. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 897071 [Passed]

Revision 897071 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:45, 15 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Improved since prior review; I will fail on repeat of the issues previously highlighted The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 897071 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:45, 15 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Improved since prior review; I will fail on repeat of the issues previously highlighted The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.