Talk:Lockdown at Missouri university lifted as police apprehend suspected gunman

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Is confused, strange and overly long. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 19:19, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

Reworded, how about this? fetch·comms 20:28, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
Vastly improved, ty :) Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 20:29, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
Now just looking for a review >.> fetch·comms 20:36, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1230858 [Passed][edit]