Talk:Minor tears found in Gordon Brown's retina

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The title makes it sound like the article is making fun of him (Minor tears, as in crying, -> title could be interperted that it is shocking that he has emotions or something along those lines). Bawolff 03:42, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

yeah, when i read that title that's the first thing that I thought. Not sure what's the best way to rephrase it. What's a good synonym for "tear" in that sense of the word? Tempodivalse [talk] 13:18, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

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