Talk:NASA's New Horizons space probe performs first close planetary flyby of Pluto

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Review of revision 3679837 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 3679837 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:24, 16 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

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Revision 3679837 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:24, 16 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: Argh. NYT source is paywalled.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 3680525 [Passed][edit]

Revision 3680525 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:47, 17 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Data was difficult to extract from the NASA site; it would have been helpful to provide multiple conventional news sources, and in using the NASA site it would have been helpful to provide either more specific links, or instructions (perhaps on the collaboration/talk page, or in html comments) for where particularly to find info on the NASA site, or both.
  • There was one rather severe copyvio, which I eliminated but doing so could have caused problems later in the review since it's not a large article (text-wise) and I'd thus used up a lot of my leeway for copyediting as reviewer.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3680525 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:47, 17 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Data was difficult to extract from the NASA site; it would have been helpful to provide multiple conventional news sources, and in using the NASA site it would have been helpful to provide either more specific links, or instructions (perhaps on the collaboration/talk page, or in html comments) for where particularly to find info on the NASA site, or both.
  • There was one rather severe copyvio, which I eliminated but doing so could have caused problems later in the review since it's not a large article (text-wise) and I'd thus used up a lot of my leeway for copyediting as reviewer.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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