Talk:Nationwide unrest continues for sixth night in France following fatal shooting of Nahel Merzouk

Review of revision 4735168 [Not ready]

Revision 4735168 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Last night was the sixth night of rioting, so please update the lead to reflect that. Verifiability: Not ready: And please add a second source for the riots continuing through the sixth night. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: And finally, the "when" of the sixth night should be in the lead. Comments by reviewer: @Asked42: Once those things are done, I think I'll have time to rereview this today before the situation changes too much. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4735168 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Last night was the sixth night of rioting, so please update the lead to reflect that. Verifiability: Not ready: And please add a second source for the riots continuing through the sixth night. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: And finally, the "when" of the sixth night should be in the lead. Comments by reviewer: @Asked42: Once those things are done, I think I'll have time to rereview this today before the situation changes too much. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Oh, I see you added a second source for the focal event as I was reviewing. Heavy Water (talk) 14:54, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

5th?

From June 29 to July 3, it is the fifth night. Asked42 (talk) 15:05, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

I think Tuesday (the 27th and when Merzouk was shot) was when the riots started; Reuters says of last night "Sixth night of riots sees fewer arrests, 300 cars torched". Heavy Water (talk) 15:21, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Ok, implementing. Asked42 (talk) 15:33, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Looking a bit better on cohesion/focus. I may do a review.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

@Asked42: Please check your talk page.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:27, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

As of this moment, in a holding pattern... waiting for answer to question.--Bddpaux (talk) 16:29, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Yeah. The headline is still unfocused though. Maybe "France: Nationwide unrest following police killing of Nahel Merzouk continues for sixth night"? That would also clarify the shooting was fatal and the killing was by police, not of police. Heavy Water (talk) 16:42, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Clarified that sentence and modified headline. All source articles checked.--Bddpaux (talk) 17:03, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Review of revision 4735232 [Passed]

Revision 4735232 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:04, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good submission. Keep at it!--Bddpaux (talk) 17:04, 3 July 2023 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4735232 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:04, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good submission. Keep at it!--Bddpaux (talk) 17:04, 3 July 2023 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.