Talk:New American Psychological Association guidelines: Parents should advise teenagers on social media use, impose restrictions

Review of revision 4726509 [Not ready]

Revision 4726509 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:34, 11 May 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: The lead doesn't state the "when" of the focal event (the release of the recommendations, that is). Comments by reviewer: Also, external links should be inserted using the {{source}} template under an "External links" heading below "Sources" and please add some categories. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4726509 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:34, 11 May 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: The lead doesn't state the "when" of the focal event (the release of the recommendations, that is). Comments by reviewer: Also, external links should be inserted using the {{source}} template under an "External links" heading below "Sources" and please add some categories. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4726847 [Passed]

Revision 4726847 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:34, 12 May 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Dr vulpes: Please see the edit history for what I did here. This article could have benefited — and still can, as significant edits can be made within the first 24 hours of publication — from more substance of the report, like: What are more of those recommendations? What would this parental guidance entail? I recognize the sources did gloss over that, but, if necessary, you can move the report itself into sources and use it. Also, note when you create a category there are a plethora of things that must be done: use the {{Topic cat}} template on the category, add it to parent categories, create a mainspace redirect or multiple (like "social media" for this one, but then also alternative names), and add it to the relevant Wikidata item. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4726847 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:34, 12 May 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Dr vulpes: Please see the edit history for what I did here. This article could have benefited — and still can, as significant edits can be made within the first 24 hours of publication — from more substance of the report, like: What are more of those recommendations? What would this parental guidance entail? I recognize the sources did gloss over that, but, if necessary, you can move the report itself into sources and use it. Also, note when you create a category there are a plethora of things that must be done: use the {{Topic cat}} template on the category, add it to parent categories, create a mainspace redirect or multiple (like "social media" for this one, but then also alternative names), and add it to the relevant Wikidata item. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.