Talk:One confirmed dead after shooting at National War Memorial in Ottawa

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Revision 2977166 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:41, 22 October 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Claims need to be attributed. Saying someone is "confirmed dead" begs the question of who confirmed; saying "It is believed that..." bets the question of who believes. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.