Talk:Pakistan security forces airstrikes kill several Taliban militants

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Revision 944721 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:41, 26 January 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is the absolute maximum amount of copyedit you're likely to get. Please note the significant changes - extensive use of 1-sentence paragraphs leaves a disjointed flow instead of a narrative. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.