Talk:Plane crash in Illinois kills seven

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Review of revision 3384571 [Passed][edit]

Revision 3384571 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 9 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The lede was much too close to source. Could have been changed more thoroughly than I did, but I was trying to minimize my intervention as reviewer.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3384571 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 9 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The lede was much too close to source. Could have been changed more thoroughly than I did, but I was trying to minimize my intervention as reviewer.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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