Talk:Poland declares state of disaster due to severe floods

Review of revision 4798046 [Not ready]

Revision 4798046 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:18, 17 September 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Hi @Djox855 Could you please implement the following changes: add date when the President made the announcement into the first paragraph add a clarification of how the announcement was made into the first paragraph (via social media, via radio, via tv, in person if so where, etc) clarify 'This would be the first time that a state of disaster has been declared.', does this apply to whole world? surely in whole world there was a disaster state previously. was it first time when in Poland there was state of disaster - probably not because in World War I and II there was a state of disaster in Poland also? what is this sentence supposed to mean then? add ', the lower house of the bicameral parliament of Poland' clarification to the first mention of Sejm change article content to past tense add clarification for what 'Czech Mi-17' is add attribution to information which is only reported by a single source provide translation of the parts of the foreign language sources which are needed (i.e., support a part of the article) optionally: add photos if freely licensed photos are available, or if you are able to take a photo yourself in the case you live near the affected area If needed click the 'Ask' button and request assistance. Regards, Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4798046 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:18, 17 September 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Hi @Djox855 Could you please implement the following changes: add date when the President made the announcement into the first paragraph add a clarification of how the announcement was made into the first paragraph (via social media, via radio, via tv, in person if so where, etc) clarify 'This would be the first time that a state of disaster has been declared.', does this apply to whole world? surely in whole world there was a disaster state previously. was it first time when in Poland there was state of disaster - probably not because in World War I and II there was a state of disaster in Poland also? what is this sentence supposed to mean then? add ', the lower house of the bicameral parliament of Poland' clarification to the first mention of Sejm change article content to past tense add clarification for what 'Czech Mi-17' is add attribution to information which is only reported by a single source provide translation of the parts of the foreign language sources which are needed (i.e., support a part of the article) optionally: add photos if freely licensed photos are available, or if you are able to take a photo yourself in the case you live near the affected area If needed click the 'Ask' button and request assistance. Regards, Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.