Talk:Police identify man's body found in a canal in Miami Gardens, Florida

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Latest comment: 1 month ago by BigKrow in topic Review of revision 4780996 [Passed]
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Michael???

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Hi, I usually don't want to ask for help but if you could take a look at the story on Miami gardens and any pointers would be great also! Thanks again, @Michael.C.Wright BigKrow (talk) 23:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

I made a few changes and tried not to break things too badly. I think the title is a bit unwieldy. It could be as simple as "Police identify a man's body found in Miami Gardens, Florida." According to its web page, Miami Gardens is a city separate from Miami,[1] though it is located within the Miami metro area. I think the title may be more clear without mentioning it is "in Miami, Florida." I changed the lede to remove "in Miami, Florida." Neither source article describes Miami Gardens as in Miami. But both stories were reported from Miami, so it could be confusing. Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 00:05, 15 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your help, @Michael.C.Wright BigKrow (talk) 01:53, 15 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4780996 [Passed]

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Thank you. BigKrow (talk) 15:15, 20 May 2024 (UTC)Reply