Talk:Red dust storm engulfs Sydney, Australia

Review of revision 886085 [Passed]

Revision 886085 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:55, 23 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: BBC sources are almost always "BBC News Online" or "BBC Sport", these then lead from the source template to the appropriate Wikipedia pages. This could possibly do with a few more wikilinks in the first half, but is pretty good so far. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 886085 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:55, 23 September 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: BBC sources are almost always "BBC News Online" or "BBC Sport", these then lead from the source template to the appropriate Wikipedia pages. This could possibly do with a few more wikilinks in the first half, but is pretty good so far. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.