Talk:Reverend Billy Joe Daugherty dies at the age of 57

Review of revision 915603 [Failed]

Revision 915603 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:07, 23 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Not checked either NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Not written with an international audience in mind? Who is he? What's the Victory Christian Centre? What nationality is he? Should be a country in the lede. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 915603 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:07, 23 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Not checked either NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Not written with an international audience in mind? Who is he? What's the Victory Christian Centre? What nationality is he? Should be a country in the lede. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 915919 [Passed]

Revision 915919 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:23, 24 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Required significant copyedit due to passive voice, excess use of "also", and some other issues/awkwardness. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 915919 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:23, 24 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Required significant copyedit due to passive voice, excess use of "also", and some other issues/awkwardness. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.