Talk:Scientist demands end to US 'addiction to oil'

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Any information not in the sources comes from this article, which I also wrote. The statistics regarding American oil consumption are taken from this website. Wackywacedictaphone 18:01, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

Please add a related news section with the BP report article, and {or}. The lede paragraph has a sentence fragment (sentence #2), and is much too long for a lede. Consider recasting it? - Amgine | t 18:41, 20 October 2010 (UTC)
Done. Thanks for pointing them out. Wackywacedictaphone 18:59, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1116844 [Passed][edit]

Should be clarified[edit]

In the title and in the article's content, if the scientist is demanding that to the whole continent, or the country that proclaims itself the "America", which is totally incorrect. Diego Grez return fire 02:38, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

In the article he says "our", but it is not clear what he is referring to. I would be very happy for the article to be renamed if it is believed that he is speaking about something else. Wackywacedictaphone 06:23, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
I believe it refers to the United States of America, and not the entire continent. Will rename the article and clarify it refers only to that country. --Diego Grez return fire 16:36, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
Thanks, Diego. Wackywacedictaphone 17:19, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

Typo[edit]

ultimatley responsible -> ultimately responsible

On Main Page. -84user (talk) 16:59, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

Done Thanks! Tyrol5 (talk) 17:02, 22 October 2010 (UTC)