Talk:Scientists analyse effects of global warming, atmospheric ozone on crops

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Revision 2772577 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:41, 28 July 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Mitigated a number of problems with passages too close to source; the reporter should work on this. Ask what is the key result, the "bottom line", and put that in the lede. What is the most important result of the study? Don't load up the lede with details, just cut to the chase. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.