Talk:Seven Russians infected with H5N8 bird flu; first cases reported in humans

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Review of revision 4606936 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4606936 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:36, 21 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • What exactly is the focal event here, and on what day did it occur?
    (Page WN:5Ws notes, in its advice about "when", that if the lede doesn't contain a "day" word —"today", "yesterday", or a day of the week— there's likely a serious problem: if it's easy to say on what day the focus happened, then the lede should say because easy five-Ws-and-H should be there, while if it's not easy to say then the focus might not be specific enough.)

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Revision 4606936 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:36, 21 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • What exactly is the focal event here, and on what day did it occur?
    (Page WN:5Ws notes, in its advice about "when", that if the lede doesn't contain a "day" word —"today", "yesterday", or a day of the week— there's likely a serious problem: if it's easy to say on what day the focus happened, then the lede should say because easy five-Ws-and-H should be there, while if it's not easy to say then the focus might not be specific enough.)

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4607483 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4607483 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:06, 23 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There were a number of passages too close to the first source. A Wikinews synthesis technique needs to not involve copy-and-change.

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Revision 4607483 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:06, 23 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There were a number of passages too close to the first source. A Wikinews synthesis technique needs to not involve copy-and-change.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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