Talk:Southern California auto maker announces fully-electric sedan

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--Brian McNeil / talk 09:52, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

No links[edit]

There are currently no links at all in this article. It shouldn't have been published this way. Cheers, Van der Hoorn (talk) 12:43, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

NPOV[edit]

I am very surprised how this managed to get published in its current form. The article reads like a press release in many places and has NPOV problems. Tempo di Valse ♪ 14:58, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

I removed the publish tag and replaced it with {{cleanup}}; I am a bit surprised that this article passed its review like this. For instance: ...But Tesla isn't just any sports car maker [...] And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way [...], among others, fail WN:NPOV. Tempo di Valse ♪ 16:54, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
I agree, this shouldn't have gone out in the form it went out in. --Killing Vector (talk) 20:45, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
Does anyone watch Married with Children? If so, did anyone see the episode where Kelly became a spokesmodel for a car? "The car of tomorrow! The NEWWWWWWWW ALLANTE!" Yeah, it's like reading a serious ad for that kind of car. Mike Halterman (talk) 21:03, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
I've read quite a bit of 'motoring news', and had gone through the sources, in that context this did not seem particularly out of order. --Brian McNeil / talk 21:28, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
Yeah I did too but was the author a test driver? Some of it is written as if someone actually took a ride in one of these. So unless that is a yes, I did my best to not remove those parts, but trying to be as NPOV as possible. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 23:09, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

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