Talk:Stingray kills head diver of Underwater World Singapore

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Review of revision 4253415 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4253415 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:36, 7 October 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Note the problem with one of the source urls.
  • Several passages of significant length were distinctly too close to source; see WN:PILLARS#own.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4253415 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:36, 7 October 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Note the problem with one of the source urls.
  • Several passages of significant length were distinctly too close to source; see WN:PILLARS#own.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
  • @Bddpaux: The image you selected was a pretty good general choice, and a really good picture; I considered leaving it, but was hoping for something more specific to the story. I admit I'm not completely happy with the one I found, as it doesn't even show water. --Pi zero (talk) 21:47, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Come to think of it, there's a whole different route to 'more specific to the story'... --Pi zero (talk) 21:55, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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