Talk:Student kills teacher in Barcelona

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Review of revision 3439113 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 3439113 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 09:09, 21 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Was some used source omitted from the list? Or was a source changed after the article was written? I found nothing in the provided sources about three being sent to hospital and one treated at the scene, nor about the student being sent for psychiatric examination.
  • The length of this is minimal, or possibly below minimal; I could see a reviewer calling it either way. Another sentence or two would be good.

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Revision 3439113 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 09:09, 21 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Was some used source omitted from the list? Or was a source changed after the article was written? I found nothing in the provided sources about three being sent to hospital and one treated at the scene, nor about the student being sent for psychiatric examination.
  • The length of this is minimal, or possibly below minimal; I could see a reviewer calling it either way. Another sentence or two would be good.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 3441661 [Passed][edit]

Revision 3441661 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:51, 22 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Distance from source was a persistent problem.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3441661 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:51, 22 April 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Distance from source was a persistent problem.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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