Talk:Suicide bomber attacks Indian Embassy in Kabul, killing at least 41
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- I am in the process of reducing Wikipedian formatting and adding text from your article. I believe the title of this one would be better as it maintains an active voice as per WN:SG#Headlines. Thank you SVTCobra and Superm401! =) Omnicloud (talk) 17:12, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
- We can have this be the destination article. I've renamed the title to allow correct grammar. However, there are still issues. There is a lot of original research from the Wikipedia article. Also, the responses section is badly formatted and you removed most of my references. Another serious issue is that there are copyvios, from the BBC and possibly elsewhere. Superm401 | Talk 17:21, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
40 or 41?