Talk:Suicide bomber attacks Indian Embassy in Kabul, killing at least 41

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Try to make this look like a news article and not like a Wikipedia page. Thanks. --SVTCobra 16:55, 7 July 2008 (UTC)


I'd like to merge to Indian embassy in Kabul bombed, as I started it a bit earlier and while short it reads more like a news story. Superm401 | Talk 17:02, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

I am in the process of reducing Wikipedian formatting and adding text from your article. I believe the title of this one would be better as it maintains an active voice as per WN:SG#Headlines. Thank you SVTCobra and Superm401! =) Omnicloud (talk) 17:12, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
We can have this be the destination article. I've renamed the title to allow correct grammar. However, there are still issues. There is a lot of original research from the Wikipedia article. Also, the responses section is badly formatted and you removed most of my references. Another serious issue is that there are copyvios, from the BBC and possibly elsewhere. Superm401 | Talk 17:21, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
Adding <ref> tags are used in Wikipedia but on Wikinews, it is discouraged. See WN:SG#Sources_section. Thanks! Omnicloud (talk) 17:33, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
Thanks, I didn't know that. I'll move them back down. Superm401 | Talk 17:37, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

40 or 41?[edit]

msn news said 40. --KansasBellington (talk) 18:55, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

New category[edit]

{{editprotected}}New category: Category:Shah Mehmood Qureshi (talk) 18:37, 11 February 2010 (UTC)

  • Done. Per caution on other article mentioning this individual, this is a borderline case, and the category needs appropriate links to Wikipedia and details of who this is. --Brian McNeil / talk 17:48, 12 February 2010 (UTC)